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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2007-04-17 06:34 PM

I stopped the world then,
took the moment in
and my heart remembered when….
just this once, again

It’s not always easy
loving you like I do
some days the emotions
spill over
drenching the hours in
.....you.....

I wade through memories
as so many times before
pausing along the way
reminiscing and quietly
wishing the future will hold
more.

~SEA~

BlueEyes
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1 posted 2007-04-17 06:38 PM

Beautiful....

jwesley
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Spring, Texas

2 posted 2007-04-17 06:39 PM

If love was ever spelled out on paper...this is it my friend....terrific write...it was YOUR pen spelling the word...so it's only as pretty as I knew it would be...

jwesley

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

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3 posted 2007-04-17 06:47 PM

simply beautiful. and the picture too.

thank you for the sharing.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2007-04-17 07:20 PM

So gentle and beautiful Susan~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Marge Tindal

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5 posted 2007-04-17 07:34 PM

SEA~
And you know ... how I feel about this beauty~

The heart remembers when~

Thank you for the beauty of you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2007-04-17 08:08 PM

fine romantic 'write'....

I particularly loved:

"I stopped the world then,
took the moment in
and my heart remembered when...
just this once, again"

Applause!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-04-17 10:03 PM

Lovely...James

Paul Wilson

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8 posted 2007-04-17 10:30 PM

SEA...Tender romantic words. A pleasure to read you...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Mysteria

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9 posted 2007-04-17 11:09 PM

Absolutely lovely Sea. I know a certain Mother Moth is going to love that poem and photo, so will make sure she gets it.

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2007-04-18 02:08 AM

Beautiful and lovingly expressed with such tenderness

Hope

playing.with.crayons
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Neverland

11 posted 2007-04-18 02:39 AM

this made me want something... quite intense actually
a beautiful write indeed.

*tips hat off to you*
~Cheye

Savvy
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since 2007-04-18

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Washington State, USA

12 posted 2007-04-18 02:56 AM

Sea,

I've never myself felt quite the degree of love that this poem envoked on my heart. I know I am young and I hope someday I can feel just a sliver of what I just felt while reading this about another person. I was moved to heart tears. Beautifully penned and beautifully displayed.
Thank You,
Kel

Speak only well of others, and need not whisper. -Unknown

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

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13 posted 2007-04-18 05:02 AM

just say hello tomorrow and the firture opens the doors!!!! take care, JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

14 posted 2007-04-18 05:54 AM

romance with you drips
then you turn it on
to full blown drench
love it

Andrew Sewell
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County Durham, England

15 posted 2007-04-18 10:19 AM

A wonderful, romantic write. Enjoyed.

Andrew

passing shadows
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displaced

16 posted 2007-04-18 11:07 AM

just like looking in the mirror

beautiful write

paullallady
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Michigan

17 posted 2007-04-18 12:49 PM

I loved the wording, this is beautiful.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

18 posted 2007-04-18 02:52 PM

(angel friendship hugs) Oh Susan, this is such a selfless and emotive write, dearest friend, it made me tear up as simply imagining being placed in that sort of pensive, sensitive place, wishing what could be, can get you overemotional! (sigh) Bless you, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

LeeJ
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19 posted 2007-04-18 03:23 PM

oh how I adore reading you, as your insightful words, pictures and insight remind me of times I've experienced.

Good reading you Sea. Thank you

Margherita
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Eternity

20 posted 2007-04-18 07:27 PM

Elegant and captivating words of longing, beautifully presented.

Love,
Margherita

SEA

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with you

21 posted 2007-04-19 10:47 AM

you guys are so nice! Thank you very much for your kind replies.

MindBodySoul
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NJ

22 posted 2007-04-19 12:47 PM

I have to say... that felt every word... it touched a very sensitive part of me.

Love is that powerful and beautiful...and it sometimes makes the world stand still, with the memories or with just the feeling.

Thank you for sharing your inner beauty

Jen--->MindBodySoul

SEA

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with you

23 posted 2007-04-20 01:02 PM

that was such a sweet reply, thank you so much

JL
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Texas, USA

24 posted 2007-04-20 04:39 PM

"I wade through memories
as so many times before
pausing along the way
reminiscing and quietly
wishing the future will hold
more."

YEP!
Great write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC

25 posted 2007-04-27 10:18 AM

Wow...I got chills! The good kind though

Magnificent, as are you!

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

OwlSA
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26 posted 2007-04-29 06:57 AM

Beautiful. Ah . . . . memories . . . .!

- Owl

Robert Jordan
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Philadelphia Pa USA

27 posted 2007-04-29 01:31 PM

SEA,

There’s a nice thought in this. However...

I stopped the world then,
took the moment in
and my heart remembered when….
just this once, again

It’s not always easy
loving you like I do
some days the emotions
spill over
drenching the hours in
.....you..... Why not just “you”?

I wade through memories
as so many times before
pausing along the way
reminiscing and quietly
wishing the future will Perhaps “would” would sound better here. hold
more.

Bobby

Robert Jordan
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Philadelphia Pa USA

28 posted 2007-04-29 01:45 PM

remove

aziza
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29 posted 2007-04-29 04:08 PM

Simply exquisite.

CocoBaci
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30 posted 2007-08-28 11:49 AM

A terrific write!

*~coco~*

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