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toast to a prosperous autumn |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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so hurried their march dressing in equality of sensation passers by day after day let pass thus we are diluted again mortified by utterly desirable well meaning designs she her last interview made no impression cept on the sin of slavery she sorely knew he his regard for views and reasoning of his mistress of darkness he said, turn around she did oh how she loved the dark it's all she knew and her fishes couldn't swim suicidal suppositions wandering maniacs of character left, where tears shed the loss of her but only for a short time seized upon any reasoning beyond distress and soon the days forgot the phantom her hope, her narrative of truth immediately began to search then, she heard the dark speak "I'm here" come, spend some pleasant time! she looked a long far off gaze then turned looking back time and again for that quiet resting place the felt and believed long desired and remained there ever since for she wanted nothing more then to love and be loved don't we all….? she… a way worn traveler might rest within the impulse of sudden fatality ohhhhh, that feeling that utter truth growing impatient I chase the moral hiding place of full moon light still trembling at the preacher's powerful voice circling widely around her she is inward discrimination mortal child sojourner of many voices wearing hats of sung song remembers and to promise of sonorous voice in rain imposing circumstance she bleeds in a grown up way woman it is merely a matter of if or when [This message has been edited by LeeJ (04-18-2007 12:25 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ I read this early today ... and let it simmer, seeping into that 'within' place that I go ...~ This is one of your finest pieces to date~ :clappiing: *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"she… a way worn traveler might rest within the impulse of sudden fatality" agreeing with Marge incredible LeeJ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"of sung song remembers and to promise of sonorous voice in rain imposing circumstance in a grown up way now she bleeds" I most enjoy how vivid your poems are, so vibrant, they leap out at me....so awesome  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
for she wanted nothing more then to love and be loved don't we all….? Yes we do Hope |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many leaves fluttering throughout this lovely opening to a new chapter... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A she wears so many hats.  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hummm… I like the way you can delve into any subject matter, and do it so well. Nice one, Hun... JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, LeeJ, awesome write! Many hats, many leaves, and at least two or three reads! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your words are so absolutely captivating, dear LeeJ. I hear the sound of drums and also of violins, the shades of life. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ You are an orchestra of words...and I'm always amazed by you! |
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