Indescribable Descriptions

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Open Poetry #40

Indescribable Descriptions

OriginalNYGuy
Junior Member

since 2007-04-14

Posts 14
Texas,US

0 posted 2007-04-17 10:36 AM

I turned on the door and opened the TV,
These indescribable actions free.
Ive felt away and walked the pain,
So many lives are lived in vain.
Freedom listens and children ring,
Impossible to be within.
Hopeful prayers to those that thought,
You think its true, Its really not.
Ive jumped these footsteps and walked around
So many times, not much was found.
Indecisive laughter with words,
Your free to fly just like a bird.
Not making change, Its time to sense,
Your life is lived in Ignorance.
Another wind lost in the day,
My feelings left in disarray.
Listen your ears, and open to me,
I do make sense, more than you see.
The truth I use, you see my skill,
I'm walking upwards, down a hill.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-04-17 12:42 PM

well, it seems to me, you describe indescribably deliciously....

well done....

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