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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2007-04-16 02:41 PM


treat you oh so bad treat me the way it seems
dip me into your twisted ways of wonderment
as the dew glisens upon your lips

how it hangs on for that kiss
the posion in me is no more
the insanity the rage is right at
my door.

in due time in due time i said
that when everything will be better
better like back then.

when one pill was good for me made the
pain go

but as i unconvered about myself i got mental
pain that is afoot that is why i am
this way

to my dismay im all up in arms
over you and ever so shallow and scared
in your presence please dont take me
under.

© Copyright 2007 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-16 07:30 PM


"ever so shallow and scared
in your presence please dont take me
under."

Love sometimes is such a wonder.

sigh!

enjoyed

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