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Losing touch

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Jenna
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0 posted 04-16-2007 08:34 AM       View Profile for Jenna   Email Jenna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jenna


Memories of us
slip by in my head
of a night
when all is still
and I'm left
with just my thoughts.
Those days
when we would talk for hours
and still find something to say,
Those times when we shared
our fears
and became so immersed in each others pain
that we almost became one.
Those weeks
when we would be apart
and miss each other so much
that it bought an ache to the heart.
So natural
and so easy
the way
our hearts and minds
just linked as if they'd never been apart.
But times change
and we're feeling the pressure
as distance tears us down
and breaks us
so we're both left
clinging to our memories
and searching for those moments
of days gone by.
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Kethry
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since 07-29-2000
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1 posted 04-16-2007 09:01 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Nicely written with all the angst of a lost love.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia


2 posted 04-16-2007 09:12 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

I can relate to those thoughts of days when we talked for hours


Hope
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Charlotte, NC


3 posted 09-26-2007 07:48 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

you read my heart, mind, and soul with this...I know you're not the person I lost...but damn you sure did write it out better than I ever could!!

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

 
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