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Tree Haiku |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Wren sings in tree's mist. Spring’s surprise, Winter’s demise! Dew-kissed buds blossom. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nice touch, Kacy~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very fine! I might yet become a devotee of these short, exacting poetic forms (particularly the Nature 'writes'!) Applause! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So lovely, dear Kacy!  Branches full of birds: they rock themselves into Spring singing to our hearts * * * Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kacy "Wren sings in tree's mist. Spring’s surprise, Winter’s demise! Dew-kissed buds blossom."  Springy hug Linda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It's so good to think of Spring when we're going in to Winter but I'll imagine the budding through your words. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I so love Spring being sung into existence by the birds that flock to my bird feeders...Somehow their wonderful voices bring my spirit alive so that I can dream anew the beauties of this world....Wonderful writing....*Big Hugs* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a delightful picture of a wren! Thanks Margherita! And thank you each for sharing this haiku, but even more so, for your Pips poetic heartsongs! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. good M . John |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a spring beauty Kacy |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
cute! |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Midnitesun, Very good hon. This works well as a classic haiku. I like them like that. Bobby |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
this is very pretty. |
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debilynn New Member
since 2007-04-16
Posts 2 |
really great poem i like this! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a beauty! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very beautifully done....this gave me a comical feel, not you, but winter's demise made me think of winter's loss....well for awhile anyway... Love reading you |
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Andrew Sewell Junior Member
since 2007-04-16
Posts 24County Durham, England |
Beautifully written. Andrew |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
simply beautiful. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Kacy, Windows are open Lush love songs trill once again Nests are next on list  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just came in from work and when I got out of the car a wren was on the fence just 6 or 8 feet from me singing his heart out...he must of known this beauty was in here and wanted me to see it. . . j. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I came back for another ‘read’ of this write! Kacy: "Wren sings in tree's mist. Spring’s surprise, Winter’s demise! Dew-kissed buds blossom." AND: Karilea: “Windows are open Lush love songs trill once again Nests are next on list” BOTH of the above are grand-fine! [I really enjoyed these!] much applause again!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanking each of you for spending a moment here! Karilea,  what a lovely reply! |
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Savvy Junior Member
since 2007-04-18
Posts 19Washington State, USA |
I really enjoy haikus. The vivid picture that you paint with your words is inspiring Kacy. Muchos Gracias for sharing this with all of us! -Kel Speak only well of others, and need not whisper. -Unknown |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Yup! Enjoyed the haiku. However, the Spring buds were kissed by SNOW this year. INclan |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, here too, INclan thanks Kel, for reading |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This is the first time I have EVER come back to post a third time on the same 'write'...but, I just love this 'haiku' AND all the great 'comment/reply' posts from such an array of fine 'P.I.P.' poets! MUCH more applause to all!! |
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