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MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2007-04-15 04:26 AM




What would you like to do
If you were born anew
If you were given another chance
In this dreary old life
That mingles tragedy with romance


~My muse has been silent for just too long~

Thank you


"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

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paullallady
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1 posted 2007-04-15 11:52 AM


a very thought provoking piece.  It has an air of sadness about it.  I really liked this.
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2 posted 2007-04-15 11:59 AM


I think I'd come back as a dog,
Pig out on grub just like a hog.
Eat and eat, and eat more food,
As now I avoid all that's good.
Counting calories until I'm blue
Yes, a dog I'd be, now how 'bout you?

Nice to read you again, I too have NO muse - zip, nada.

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3 posted 2007-04-15 02:49 PM


EnchantedMelody~
It is simply wonderful to see you here~

What a lovely gift you share~

Give that toddler a *huglet* from me~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

Startime55
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4 posted 2007-04-15 03:10 PM


Good Question....I would do it all again...with all the mistakes and all the pain....for it was all these things that made me who I am....I am greatful for any more tests that are sent my way that I may improve even more if I am smart enough to see the lesson within....Well done...Sometimes we all need new beginnings...*Big Hugs*
Huan Yi
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5 posted 2007-04-15 04:52 PM


.


Life

It beats dead
hands down


.

John


Sunshine
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6 posted 2007-04-15 09:39 PM


MEM....

What a lovely question...

and what a thanks we can give
over the age of your babe.

Well done, and welcome home.



" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2007-04-16 07:00 AM





paullallady

An air of sadness! I'm not sure. Perhaps it's because of this secret wish that if I'd live it anew...my choices would be different.

Thank you

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dearest ..Mysteria

I don't think you have no muse
not if you choose

Or else how could you..?

"I think I'd come back as a dog,
Pig out on grub just like a hog.
Eat and eat, and eat more food,
As now I avoid all that's good.
Counting calories until I'm blue
Yes, a dog I'd be, now how 'bout you?"

Thank you as always
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Marge Tindal
It feels wonderful to be here with you again after such a looooong time.

My angel sends you his ~hugs~ too . He is fond of hugging
Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Startime55

So you would do it all again?
I wish I feel the same.

They always say that if you were given another chance to live, you 'd always make the same mistakes and the same choices.

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
John

Thank you for responding to this.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dear Sunshine

You are truly our sunshine.
It's nice to be home enjoying the presence of the sunshine  

Thank you

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