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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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0 posted 2007-04-15 04:21 AM



Trapper
Pick up my temper
and Gently dust off the pain, will you?
So my friend Anger
May wear it again.

Trapper
Collect all my tears
and Carefully rinse the salt, will you?
So my friend Sorrow
Will have a clean container

Trapper
Trash out my heart
of cold and the hard
Then my friend Love
Will come to feed my dove

Trapper
Peel off my civility
The contaminated utility
Then my friend Passion
Oh, passion, my dear friend
Will wrap me warmly
In graceful heavenly fashion

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-16-2007 01:06 AM).]

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-04-15 12:29 PM


Very original composition, dear Drauntz.

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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2 posted 2007-04-15 10:30 PM




"Trapper
Peel off my civility
The contaminated utility
Then my friend Passion
Oh, passion, my dear friend
Will wrap me warmly
In graceful heavenly fashion"

delightful work Drauntz


Balladeer
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3 posted 2007-04-15 10:36 PM


There is an elegance to the gentleness of the lines which makes it a very soothing read....very nicely done.
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