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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Separated I'm listening to the rain falling Through this silent lonely night, Looking at the horizon, Where my heart is calling Me, separated from my mind. I, disenchanted, feeble, frail, Give in to weakness, momentary. My pride's a guile, I'm not afraid That you'll discover all my truth - You know where my hope is buried Much better than I do. On me you shed your inner light - Turn into shadows my fears. If I could stay with you tonight And in the morning disappear, Or die, but in your arms... I'd die. And I endulge in just one dream Till it's dissolved in fresh spring air By winds of anguish and despair When once blue skies just seem so dim Without you there. Twenty-five hours a day, Eight days a week of you I'm thinking. Forgive my sins of yesterday And stay with me... don't leave me sinking In waters of dismay. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wonderful and touching piece of writing. Thank you for indulging me on this morning. |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Amazing imagery, could really feel your words |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
strong, emotive ‘write’! I particularly liked: “I'm listening to the rain falling Through this silent lonely night, Looking at the horizon, Where my heart is calling...” And: “.....I indulge in just one dream Till it's dissolved in fresh spring air By winds of anguish and despair...” Applause! P.S.: I REALLY like your choice of 'P.I.P.' I.D. (user name)! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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