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Open Poetry #40

I Am Me

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-04-15 04:01 AM

I Am Me

The scars of time have disappeared,
My blood, so cold, is now ice,
To poison 've turned once pure tears -
You see me in my other guise.

I'm only struggling for survival,
And I'll withstand by any means.
The whole world and me are rivals,
But in the end I'm bound to win.

My faith - my fortitude - is stronger
Than air castles of your lies,
And not a single minute longer
I'll be a shadow in your eyes.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2007-04-15 04:35 AM

My faith - my fortitude - is stronger
Than air castles of your lies,
And not a single minute longer
I'll be a shadow in your eyes.

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The closing lines are just wondeful and so full of determination.

Thank you for a nice powerful poem on this morning

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

2 posted 2007-04-15 11:51 AM

a poem of inner strength, and done beautifully.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2007-04-16 06:46 AM

"And not a single minute longer
I'll be a shadow in your eyes"
From a such position of strength,
a heart can survive anything.

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