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Drauntz
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0 posted 2007-04-15 03:04 AM





Men are chatting
While barbecue on the green
Wind is mild
smoke is thin

on the eucalyptus tree
Leaves gently swing
In mother’s beam
Babies happily cling

Clouds quietly tip by
On the brilliant blue screen.



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Martie
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1 posted 2007-04-15 11:10 AM


Dear Drauntz.....I love that kind of day!
paullallady
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2 posted 2007-04-15 11:45 AM


you have described a beautiful day, touching my senses and emotions.
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3 posted 2007-04-15 12:40 PM


You transported me there! ~ and I liked the view and how calm it made me feel! Thanks! I needed that!


Linda

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4 posted 2007-04-15 11:39 PM


Reminders of a time long since passed.....and missed. Thanks for the memory
Andrew Sewell
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5 posted 2007-04-16 11:48 AM


A wondeful view and a most enjoyable read.

Andrew

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6 posted 2007-04-16 12:07 PM


awesome!!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-04-18 09:26 PM


Enjoyed...is this a park in Los Angeles or Cerritos California...James
Drauntz
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8 posted 2007-04-18 09:54 PM


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