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Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
Posts 180


0 posted 2007-04-14 06:41 AM



I am thinking of giving this to a friend so opinions are needed!


I know I confuse you
and that at times
you may not understand
why I feel the way I do
and why I push you away
when you can see
that I need your love
and tender words.
You know that i've built walls
and hidden from the things that hurt,
yet you perserve
and help me rebuild what is lost,
filling the emptiness and blackness that is inside,
restoring me with faith,
bringing me back to the light
and guiding me to safer waters.
Just like the missing parts of the puzzle
you link everything back together again
fitting them back into place
so a clearer picture can be seen
and everything is right again.
Only you can heal me in this way,
bringing down my defences
so theres nothing left but the pain
which you manage to erase bit by bit
until the weight has lifted.
I may not reveal much,
at times nothing at all
but it never fails to amaze me
how you hear the words I never speak.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-04-14 09:33 AM


I suppose you can see why your title got my attention! lol

By all means, I believe you should give this to your friend. As you have found it difficult for you to express your feelings verbally, you have managed to do it very well through this open and very emotive piece of writing.

Loving Light,
EA

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
2 posted 2007-04-15 05:04 PM


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"I am thinking of giving this to a friend so opinions are needed!"


Don't


John


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Jenna
Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180

3 posted 2007-04-16 03:13 AM


Well it would be helpful if you could say why rather then just saying 'dont'
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