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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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0 posted 2007-06-03 05:58 PM



Life’s Dream

Life is never what it seems
but just a place of endless dreams
from which you wake when life is done
to find that it has just begun.

When passing to this ethereal zone
you’ll find a place to call your home
amongst  the others just like you
where dreams and nightmares all come true.

You’ll link with others of your kind
and share the essence of your mind
for all are bound by common seed
and natural laws that feed our need.

Eternal law of ‘Like on Like’
ensure a common chord you’ll strike
and help to form a collective soul
in Heaven, or in Hell’s deep hole.

So choose your living friends with care
eternally they’re always there,
the choices made within life’s dream
are all exactly what they seem...

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-06-19 04:54 PM


So choose your living friends with care
eternally they’re always there,
the choices made within life’s dream
are all exactly what they seem...

~*~

Thank you, Ivors!


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-06-19 05:21 PM


"Eternal law of ‘Like on Like’
ensure a common chord you’ll strike
and help to form a collective soul
in Heaven, or in Hell’s deep hole."

Hi, Ivor-y! I am in complete accord with your postulations!
I believe that "Like attracts like" and live my life accordingly!

Another fine write from your illustrious pen!

Love & Light,

Linda

RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 126
Oregon
3 posted 2007-06-19 05:46 PM


Fantastic verse and you have superbly stated my own sentiments, thanks for a great read.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2007-06-19 06:26 PM


Ivor,
Alot of truth in what you say, enjoyed.

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