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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-04-13 11:09 PM

    The Vales of Time
    [a tribute to a
      poet and 'natural
       philosopher']

   Slow and silent
   sands of sleep,
   slip upon
   the sunset scene
   in woodland dreams
   of gypsy winds,
   whispering to her
   wayward heart,
   with loon-songs
   sung in sweet refrain,
   as moon-beam spirits
     dance
   in Aurora’s ‘rainbow
     lights’,
   like silent, shimmering
     scimitars...
   that strike all cares
   and leave her soul
     in peace,
   to roam the vales
     of Time!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-04-13 11:39 PM

You are writing beauty.
A caress left to the temple.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-04-14 12:33 PM

what a soft breeze waft through my mind.

beautiful song for the soul and so smooth.

enjoyed very much!

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

3 posted 2007-04-14 08:27 AM

Flawless and pure, this is beautiful.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2007-04-15 12:36 PM

quote:
with loon-songs
   sung in sweet refrain,
   as moon-beam spirits
     dance
   in Aurora’s ‘rainbow
     lights’,
   like silent, shimmering
     scimitars

my loon spirit sings
the beauty of this imagery

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-04-15 02:54 PM

Bruce~

Now didn't I just find myself liking the ALL OF THIS ?
YES I DID !!

'Slow and silent
   sands of sleep,
   slip upon
   the sunset scene
   in woodland dreams
   of gypsy winds,
   whispering to her
   wayward heart,
   with loon-songs
   sung in sweet refrain,
   as moon-beam spirits
     dance
   in Aurora’s ‘rainbow
     lights’,
   like silent, shimmering
     scimitars...
   that strike all cares
   and leave her soul
     in peace,
   to roam the vales
     of Time!'

BEAUTY with each pen stroke of thought~

*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2007-04-15 03:01 PM

BRAVO!!! Your words create visions and magic that take the soul on a voyage of pure delight where dreams have no darkness and life is fill with the true love mankind was designed to give....*sigh*...the voyage your words took me on was uplifting...I love it...*Big Hugs*

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