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howardtsu
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0 posted 2007-06-03 04:32 PM



howard :

                                           everytime i listen to Nickelback

                      i want my favorite nickel back

                      is she still hot enough to melt her ice cicles?

Her boss :

                                                      yes

                      but she admits she misses your nice tickles

                      and the way you sliced her dill pickles

                      you guys made hamburgers so sweet

                      what made your feet

                                          walk away anyway?

                                                    



                                                                                   love,

                                                                                   Mr. Big


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gmcooper
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since 2007-05-30
Posts 47

1 posted 2007-06-03 05:25 PM


You present a really nice form here and it reads like a narrative.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2007-06-03 05:33 PM


Enjoyed...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-06-05 06:32 AM


My sweet Howard! I have missed your words... I do hope Eve is well yes???   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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