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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-04-13 04:08 AM

Unbeknown the hidden rises
up, up, and unto love
calling like a little child
“Look, look at me”
but nothing can be seen
within the emotive feel
of all I was and am
and will be soon again.

A lover’s song accompanies
the music of a heart
and I catch the words quicker now
in this awakening
to the immortal tender
that moves within a reach and stretch
to where I cannot go.

And as a mind attunes
to eternal energy
the best of all you were and are
and will be soon again
strums within a need
inexhaustibly apparent
to the goddess in me.

This is love, you know,
made somewhere to exist
to lift and push the clouds away
from life’s disharmony
clanging so incessantly
in the daily grind.

But life, oh, life, this devil “thing”
begets unto most everyone
the ears that cannot hear,
a heart that cannot feel,
and a mind so out of tune
that it flits and flutters aimlessly
like a lost butterfly.

The best, the best, of you and me
will one day listen, feel, believe,
that nothing happens mindlessly
to bring within a symphony!

Helen / 13 April 2007

[This message has been edited by Honeybunch (04-13-2007 06:41 AM).]

outlawthunder
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 67

1 posted 2007-04-13 07:45 AM

Masterpiece!

as eloquent and dynamic a
piece of writing i have read
in a very long time. and how
much JUSTICE you put into your
words giving the right of love
to be in it's rightful place a
daily fixture of a kind and
compassionate world.

Bravo!

OUTAWTHUNDER

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-04-13 09:49 AM

"nothing happens mindlessly
to bring within a symphony!"...how true.

enjoyed very much.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-04-13 11:07 AM

quote:
And as a mind attunes
to eternal energy
the best of all you were and are
and will be soon again
strums within a need
inexhaustibly apparent
to the goddess in me.

Soul awakening!

Love,
Margherita

Devious Intellectual
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

4 posted 2007-04-13 12:46 PM

yea i def. like your style, the quotables are already quoted from the other users, but you wrote in manner that made this more interesting and that is what stuck on to me

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2007-04-13 01:33 PM

Thanks everyone for your comments. I appreciate them all very much.

Helen

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-04-13 02:18 PM

"A lover’s song accompanies
the music of a heart
and I catch the words quicker now
in this awakening"

~ Oh, yes, Honey! That certainly IS love!

I'm smiling! ~ and giving you a big hug!

Linda

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2007-04-13 02:29 PM

Oh yes, indeed this is love....You capture feeling and emotion beautifully in this wonderful poem...*Big Hugs*

Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

8 posted 2007-04-13 06:18 PM

"nothing happens mindlessly"
That's what I must tell myself. For the next few days, perhaps weeks, I am close totally deaf. Feeling a bit lonely ... Looking for company through reading the poems on Passions.
Thank you Helen.
And a hug
Jaime

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2007-04-13 06:27 PM

Nothing happens mindlessly - what comfort there is in those words. Thank you for penning these words I needed to hear them today.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

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