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passing shadows
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0 posted 2007-06-03 02:35 PM



I miss you completely,
with every bone in my body,
every hair on my head.

If I could just touch you
once,
leaving words unsaid.

It's just another day
I sleep away
rather than staring out

wanting the rain to come
to give perspective
on what life's about.

I need a change of scenery,
a lighter greener view,
I need rain in the mornings,
and at night a touch from you.


© Copyright 2007 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-06-03 03:10 PM


Excellent...I'm missing someone right now...missing is a part of wanting and needing...James
Margherita
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2 posted 2007-06-04 07:58 AM


Such an intense write, dear Dixie. May the rain clarify everything. At least it will create the atmosphere that allows you to go inside and find the answers.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Neeraja
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3 posted 2007-06-04 09:55 AM


This poem I can feel deeply...
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4 posted 2007-06-04 10:02 AM


Good poem.
Touching.

A

Jenna
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5 posted 2007-06-04 12:49 PM


I loved this a lot. It was so honest and touching. Came straight from the heart.
The Lady
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6 posted 2007-06-04 10:07 PM




this is wonderful...


"a lighter greener view,
I need rain in the mornings,
and at night a touch from you."


Joty
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7 posted 2007-06-04 10:17 PM


Wow girl...you are inspiring...I realy enjoyed that...Reading and learning...
MindBodySoul
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8 posted 2007-06-04 10:43 PM


Missing someone is beautiful yet so sad at times.   I hope the rain you seek, will fall soon and will help you clear your thoughts... search within and find your sactuary...

Just beautiful.. thanks for sharing!!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-06-05 06:19 AM


I hear you Dixie girl .... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

HopeS
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10 posted 2007-06-05 01:43 PM


Love and longing beautifully expressed

Hope

icebox
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11 posted 2007-06-06 12:58 PM



Oh, yes.

Of all the things...I miss touch the most.




Drauntz
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12 posted 2007-06-06 01:06 AM


quite romantic. very good.
enjoyed.

wish you well, dear passing

latearrival
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13 posted 2007-06-06 02:49 AM


Everyone needs the feel of a soft touch. Maybe we should all vow to hug a stranger when we see the need.  You Are Loved. martyjo
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14 posted 2007-06-07 06:20 PM


Beautiful sis. A perfect echo to what's been going on in my head.

"The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump."

vandana
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15 posted 2007-06-07 06:27 PM


good read
MegMeg
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16 posted 2007-06-07 07:47 PM


feel your pain, great poem
Earth Angel
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17 posted 2007-06-08 10:17 AM


Darlin' Dixie, you certainly know how to reach out and grab a reader in the solar plexus and bring them into your world. Now where is that clarifying rain? I think that I could do with some of that right now, myself!

Sending you some cleansing spring rain,

Linda

LeeJ
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18 posted 2007-06-08 10:25 AM


Perfection
simply romantic


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