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outlawthunder
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0 posted 2007-04-12 11:19 PM


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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-04-13 12:28 PM


Thunder, you a talented poet. i have enjoyed very much in reading your writings.
outlawthunder
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2 posted 2007-04-13 12:32 PM


it's not without a price. and sometimes the price is too high. but, if i give up, they win.

take care,

OUTLAWTHUNDER

Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-13 12:39 PM


may you give up being a figher. why not be a pure heart child?
outlawthunder
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4 posted 2007-04-13 01:23 AM


my child heart was butchered

so i fight for no one child anywhere to
know that terror ever not now not ever

never.

OUTLAWTHUNDER

Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-13 09:37 AM


bad experience, bad life is part of life. How you let a dead tree change the view of the whole froest is your choice...which of course will have an impact on your mood of daily life and how you handle things.
you may live a day in happiness
you may live a day in sadness
you may live every day in anger
you may live some in calm.
We have to make a choice and self talk about it.
this is very serious.
one way to have a joyful life is to count the blessings.....count blessings...count the blessings of big or samll in life.
take very good care of yourself.

outlawthunder
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6 posted 2007-04-13 10:39 AM


thank you for your comments, Drauntz

OUTLAWTHUNDER

Drauntz
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7 posted 2007-04-13 11:10 AM


Mine is not hypocritical talking. I can spend days to listen to your anger.
But do you believe that human can truly comfort your sorrow heart?
Other might lit your inner candle but you have to let it keep burning to give out the bright light. Truly.  Best wishes to you! and have a wonderful day and be happy!

Margherita
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8 posted 2007-04-13 11:23 AM


quote:
hold my hand Mother Nature's
Land i'll care for you be glad

this is my home where buffalo
roam it's here i will depend

roaming lonesome turtle doves
long gone from down below

all that's left before me now
on that i can depend

be still my soul the pain gone
hold i'm free to live and mend...



There is this longing for peace and harmony and justice.
"Free to live and mend" ... which I would modify to "free to love". Everything is mended through love.

Your poem is beautiful.
Love,
Margherita


outlawthunder
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9 posted 2007-04-13 11:38 AM


thank you, Margherita

the buffalo and comments
are quite a combination.

thank you for both,

OUTLAWTHUNDER

outlawthunder
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10 posted 2007-04-13 11:39 AM


thank you for your comments, Drauntz

OUTLAWTHUNDER

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