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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-04-12 10:02 PM


In My Heart I Desire Sincere

"Once there was a man that would always
kick his dog, every chance he got
he'd give out a good shot.
The dog became complacent, always expecting
the coming kick, the kick became the norm,
an expression of his masters scorn.
One day the man realized that he was
causing his dog much pain, so he
became determined to change.
He stopped kicking his dog, but
the dog had come to believe that the
man still had a kick up his sleeve.
Time passed away and the dog started
to believe that the man was not the same,
his master had found a way, a reason to change.
Over time, to the dog, it became more clear,
that the man had become caring and sincere.
No longer did he cause his dog pain,
and in the absence of pain the dogs
heart was able to change."

When my sweetheart is near I believe she's sincere.
When she's not near its unclear if she's sincere.
I want to believe my sweetheart is sincere,
even in those times when she's not near.
I want to know love lives for me, within her heart
whether we're together or when we're apart.
I want our love to be perfectly clear,
in my heart, I desire sincere.

"Embraced by sincere, it felt nice to stand in
the rain, absent of the pain, absent of the pain."

JamesLee
12April
2007



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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-04-12 10:17 PM


what a comparing! it is good and it is everybody's hope.
heard your heart song.
back to life, one  can only tell oneself to be sincere but has no any control on other people's feelings. we can always hope... but we may get hurt. After we have been hurt three times if we still believe that there is sincere feelings, then true human.  

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2007-04-13 12:35 PM


quote:
When my sweetheart is near I believe she's sincere.
When she's not near its unclear if she's sincere.



In her presence you get the strongest impression and I would rely on this, to be in "absence of pain". Listen to your heart, dear James, and tell the ego to stay silent.

Quite a story, I felt sorry for the dog ... and then for you, because of lack of trust. Intense write.

Love and light.
Margherita

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-04-14 06:02 PM


Thank you Drauntz and Margherita for the nice responses...
I do have a trust issue...
but my sweetheart has a communication issue.
We have been working on these issues and much progress has been made...
she is starting to realize that through more open communication, my trust is growing, and my happiness is increasing...James

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