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Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
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Massachusetts, USA

0 posted 2007-04-12 02:12 PM


Life is like an ocean wave,
Continuum through time,
It leaves so many questions unanswered,
Can we all really find happiness,
That to me is my unknown answer.

I sit here and think,
Why are my eyes burning holding back tears,
What is making it surface,
Loneliness, depression,
I have no clue,
I just feel trapped.


Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2007 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-04-12 04:06 PM


quote:
Life is like an ocean wave,
Continuum through time



Beautifully put. Now ride those ocean waves and capture the tune of life, which besides melancholy, also holds so much beauty. May you feel free, not trapped. We can find happiness, even without receiving all the answers. Happiness can be found in little things of every day. A sunlit shore, an ocean wave, a blue sky etc.

Love and joy.
Margherita

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-04-12 06:17 PM


oh, how sad.
Ocean wave has high and low,
then listen to the moon
to her sweetest talk.

or build the bigest ship to ride on it...the love.

enjoyed.

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