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Goodbye |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I saw you again lastnight Actually every time I close my eyes Your face dances on the back of my eyelids You were alive Holding a newborn in your lap My senses became paralyzed I felt your spirit as if you never left us My heart mastered the art of procrastination I don't know what it was maybe I was too hurt and guilt stricken It's not that I tried denying the end of your chapter and the beginning of your eternal life that you wouldn't be able to share with us If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a sad write Kristen..well said. Sending hugs your way, Nancy  For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very poignant and powerfully rendered feelings. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Kris, I am so sorry for your loss. A person as loving and sensitive as you are, feel things so deeply. You've been missed. May the spring renew your spirit. Giving you a loving, healing hug, Linda |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
A gentle heart tells a story of sorrow. |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
i like the last four lines, kinda wraps it up properly, nice read |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I think this is summed up in the title, but your words paint such a poingnant and heartwrenching write. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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