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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-04-12 01:46 AM

There is no light
At the moonless night
I sit under the deck
Beside Bonanza vines
With a burning candle
I'm staring at my wine
With tears crawling
wishing him were fine.

I wish him were fine.

So I will be fine
At the moonless night
In my joyless mind
To my dearest friend,
I wish you were fine.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-04-12 08:18 AM

"I wish him were fine.

So I will be fine"

~ It's hard to feel fine when those we care about are not feeling fine.

May you both be fine!

You did a masterful job of setting the tone of this write.

EA

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-04-12 03:27 PM

True caring is felt here.

Beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-04-12 10:20 PM

Concerned friends do help...James

outlawthunder
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 67

4 posted 2007-04-12 10:54 PM

it's risky to care

some nights the rain is so
hard the candle won't light

some nights the concern is so
heavy on the soul your hand
can hardly raise the match to
candle for the lighting

some nights you just can't
hurt like this anymore or you
will surely die it's so hard
to go on this way...

yet you do

why???

OUTLAWTHUNDER

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-12 11:36 PM

I'll tell you why, Thunder.
This world is a dark world. so I cherish a dim light from a firefly.
This world is a cold world. so I cherish every unfrozen life.
ignorence kills and I have seen, heard many.
If I die tomorrow I will not leave any good word for others unsaid before tonight.
If you die tomorrow I will not wait till then crying the praise of you to your tome.
life, all together is only 96F...only enough to keep our heart beat and blood flowing and a functional brain.
If you have been loved then find chance to give. The love, is not the desire of reproduction ( if yes but shall only a tiny portion). If love, then be the true, and the purest love.

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-13-2007 06:10 PM).]

outlawthunder
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 67

6 posted 2007-04-12 11:48 PM

ok

OUTLAWTHUNDER

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2007-04-13 03:53 AM

touching and heartfelt ,when my friend is hurting I hurt too

Hope

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