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Softly!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA 
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Softly! Softly through the night there whispers in my heart,gentle words of tender caring telling me to have no worries. Take these things from me and lift my spirits,bring back the smile that was so fleeting my soul hears you. The rising sun in all her glory lights our lives and warms our bodies,night skies so star filled soft moonlight stealing kisses. Dark eyes meet each other blend with such sweet melting,tender shaky smiles lips quiver with the passions. Firelight flickers all are dancing,finger tips brush each other,each touch brings us closer. Your hands slide along my arm sending shocks right through me,swaying together to the music. The whole world fades away to nothing,silence drops around us,silvered dark skin glowing your smile wakes my knowing. How long is a lifetime,how many days will the magic last,how many precious moments,you whisper let us find out? I have known you my whole life,in my dreams you walked,now you are here to my touch,together now we will move forward. No more running from each other,the love we sought we found waiting in the heart of our best friend. Together we share so much,those things that to us are so important,in you I find understanding of what I am. In me you find the strong woman you need,to walk beside you always,to share both joys and burdens. This is the way it was meant to be,two spirits joined as one,each bringing out the best in the other. Before the Clans we stand,hand in hand,from this day forward we share one path,together we build new life!
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearSisterFriend~ 'This is the way it was meant to be,two spirits joined as one,each bringing out the best in the other.' Such beauty and understanding all summed up~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You speak softly and with wisdom, Great Spirit Daughter.  "This is the way it was meant to be,two spirits joined as one,each bringing out the best in the other." ~ Nodding in total agreement. Fortunate are we who have found a love such as this. It was a pleasure to read your venerable words once again. Love & Spirit Light, EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful love tale! Your words capture the essence of spirit-mate love! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Beautifully and tenderly INTENSE! Love, Margherita  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Many parts of this most fine ‘write’ could virtually stand alone as ‘poems’ in their own right….even the very first lines: “Softly through the night there whispers in my heart,gentle words of tender caring telling me to have no worries.” This poem is also assuredly grand-fine ‘Romanticism’... I particularly loved such lines as: “how many days will the magic last, how many precious moments, you whisper let us find out?” “…..the love we sought we found waiting in the heart of our best friend.” and….In my ever-most-humble opinion, the following is quite simple “as good as it gets”!: “in you I find understanding of what I am. In me you find the strong woman you need, to walk beside you always, to share both joys and burdens. This is the way it was meant to be, two spirits joined as one, each bringing out the best in the other.” much, MUCH applause! |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Beloved sister friend my heart thanks you,this is the story of my grandparents. This is the way she told me that love should be,and with all my heart I believe her!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Siyo Earth Angel it is true blessed are those who find such a love,for no even time can steal it away!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Siyo Midnightsun my guide in the words of love,held within her one of the most beautiful and abiding loves I have ever seen.I watched with my own eyes this very love all my life,and though they walked a thorny path their words one to the other were always filled with tender caring.
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Vsigi Marghrita this is the only love I could accept,one given with heart and soul!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Vsigi Secondhanddreampoet,my heart thanks you for your kindness I am deeply honored by your words. Each time I think of love,this is the music of my spirit.Only complete trust,and total love would be acceptable that means to me an opening of self that leaves one defensless.If one can not trust the other that deeply,there is no real love.This is the love my grandparents shared,and I have seen with my own eyes one bare their soul to the others knife knowing they were safe!
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow. the love, never ending topic, is so well sung here. it warms my heart. Love is always beautiful. and so your poem! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, yes, I believe her too! There is no other way for love to be. Beautifully written and so very much enjoyed. Thank you! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was spiritually rewarding....good to see you back here writing again.... well done lady! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderful story that's is beautifull written in language that makes it magical. Evetything about this poem is a joy to behold. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
exquisite story granny so well done it is truly good to read you again |
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outlawthunder Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 67 |
how simple to pronounce: love add three letters, just three: ing loving powerful, perhaps the most powerful force driving the universe from the very start. how you write of love strikes at the core of loving. nothing short of wonderfully pure loving for one who can write about it in such a magnificent way. OUTLAWTHUNDER |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words weave a magic spell that teaches us all what love is really all about....A stunningly beauitful poem...*Big Hugs* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice flow of thoughts...James |
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