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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2007-04-09 10:27 AM



        

Unknown Waters
~ Linda L. Dowd ~

I leapt in to unknown waters,
In a defiant leap of faith.
And was swept away in swirling currents,
Like a helpless, wayward waif.

I flailed my arms and gasped for air,
As strong eddies pulled me down.
I could not see the light of day,
And I feared that I would drown.

I had not known the ways of God,
So I searched for understanding.
I felt His love had eluded me,
For my life was so demanding.

I knew that I could sink ~ or swim,
But I lacked the will to fight,
When out of the dark a Hand appeared,
That raised me to the Light.  

My spirit burst with loving Light,
As God's presence made me whole.
His healing Hand resurrected me,
And I surrendered all control.


~*~

The road I walk still has its stones,
Yet I embrace each blessed day,
For God has sent a band of angels
To guide me along my way.

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[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-11-2007 11:08 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2007-04-09 12:18 PM


Angelo Terrestre! Your name in Italian sounds good to my ears.
What a beautifully inspired poetic offering, dear Linda!!
Those unknown waters appear sometimes surprisingly and we fear their insidiousness, but when we remain aware of God's constant presence, we always are guided back into the Light of Faith.

Simply wonderful and uplifting! Thank you for this!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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2 posted 2007-04-09 12:18 PM


How absolutely BEAUTIFUL!  You take your artistic ability and put it into words Linda.  Happy Easter to you and yours "over there" from "over here."
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-04-09 01:15 PM


Margherita ~

Thank you, Magestic One!

With love,

Angelo Terrestre

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-04-09 01:18 PM


Mysterious One ~

That was very sweet of you to say, Sharon! Thank you!

~ And may the blessings of Easter be with you and your loved ones throughout the year!

Giving you a warm hug 'n a broad smile,
Linda



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5 posted 2007-04-09 01:19 PM


SweetEarthy~
A lovely, lovely offering~

Light and love ... faith in above~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Earth Angel
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6 posted 2007-04-09 02:59 PM


MT ~

"Light and love ... faith in above~"

~ You're a poet and surely know it!

Loving Light,

Linda

LeeJ
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7 posted 2007-04-10 10:05 AM


just what I  needed to read today, thanks so much.  Hope you had a wonderful Easter...hugs to ya Linda...
Luv
Lee J.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2007-04-10 10:28 AM


Earth Angel
And he finally made you an Angel. Well done.

Startime55
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9 posted 2007-04-10 11:15 AM


I know the feeling and rejoice in you life...though there will still be trials it will all be worth it to live in His light....Magnificent writing...I love the whole feel of this poem...*Big Hugs*
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2007-04-10 03:59 PM


Lee J ~

Yes, my Easter was "wonderful". Although this was my first Easter since the passing of my parents, I was still able to embrace the joys in my life with gratitude. I hope yours was all that you would have hoped it would be. You deserve only the best, my dear friend.

Love & Easter blessings,
Linda

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11 posted 2007-04-10 04:00 PM


Mr. T. ~

Aww, that was so sweet of you to say, Sir Sonneteer!


EA

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12 posted 2007-04-10 04:03 PM


Startime ~

Hi, Karen! Thank you for that thoughtful reply! I just now finished reading your own poem "Each Drop of Blood" and was very impressed!

Loving hug,
Linda

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13 posted 2007-04-10 04:15 PM


"The road I walk still has its stones,
Yet I embrace each blessed day,
For God has sent a band of angels
To guide me along my way."

My heart is with you.
You are Blessed, and you show it here.
Beautiful write EA.

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

The Lady
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14 posted 2007-04-10 10:51 PM




ahhh Linda Angel

only angels can guide another angel

and only you could write a poem like this


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15 posted 2007-04-10 11:17 PM


for all the doubt of too many yesterdays and fear of tomorrows while we stand in the quicksands of our todays there comes along a poem to take the power away from those things and people that control our destiny with fear and uncertainty.

as such, this poem did that. with grace, dignity, humility, and genuine love.

now, about tomorrow...

OUTLAWTHUNDER

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2007-04-11 11:10 AM


JL ~

"My heart is with you." ~ I know it is. You are a very compassionate man and I appreciate your kindness and thoughtfulness.

Blessings of love & joy to you,

EA

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2007-04-11 11:13 AM


Lady Kate ~

Your lovely replies are always a pleasure to read. They are honeysuckle sweet ~ just like you!

Warm hug of love,

Your "Linda Angel"

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2007-04-11 11:17 AM


outlawthunder ~

Howdy, Outlaw! Pleased to make your acquaintance! Welcome aboard the pip ship!

Your effusive and generous response to my poetic efforts, was heart-warming to read. Thank you very much!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

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19 posted 2007-04-12 05:09 PM


I'm glad I strayed back after so long.  Your words always touching me when I need them the most. God Bless you sweet Linda.  

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2007-04-13 11:21 AM


Ceinwyn ~

My goodness, you've been gone for such a long time! It was such a pleasant surprise to hear from you!

As always, your reply was very touching. Thanks, Kris!

Giving you a big, warm, welcome-back hug,
Linda

ivordavies
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21 posted 2007-04-13 11:14 PM


Linda,

An 'intriguing' piece of poetry which seems to tell a story of recovery.  I feel there is a lot that has gone into motivating this piece and runs on a parellel to a piece I once wrote on depresion but with different evaluations of the process that led to finding oneself again.

I love poetry that has heart and makes me think and as always I love your rhyming presentation and style.

I am sorry I've not been around for a while and when I get time I really must catch up one what I'm missing....

Ivor

PS, there are always a band of angels looking over us....

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2007-04-14 08:50 AM


Ivor ~

Well I was about to send an angel posse out to look for you! Don't be such a stranger!

"I love poetry that has heart and makes me think and as always I love your rhyming presentation and style."

~ Ditto for me regarding YOUR poetry!!! Namaste

I appreciate your thought-full reply!

It was good to hear from you!

Big hug,
Linda

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23 posted 2007-04-14 12:55 PM


Holding out my arms to give you a great big .  Hope this helps! Sending you an extra "Special Angel" to help you through those rough days.




Earth Angel
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24 posted 2007-04-14 01:05 PM


Sweet Sue ~

You are such a loving and caring soul.

That graphic is divine and I saved it to my "Angel Folder".

Thank you, my dear friend!

Linda

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25 posted 2007-04-18 03:06 PM




(angel faith hugs) Yay! And when the Light is always hovering above you no matter which unchartered channels you are wading in, somehow the waters don't feel all that unknown after all in that you know Faith has an omnipresent place in this world, yay! (smiles) Bless you, dearest friend, I hope all is well with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2007-04-19 08:49 AM


Noah Angel ~

What a lovely ~ and highly profound ~ reply!
I appreciate the thought you put in responding to my poetic effort. Thank you!

May faith keep you forever afloat!


Linda

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