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Love's Embrace
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Love's Embrace |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Love’s Embrace I awoke.... here.... remembering.... morning songs of Spring in the bloom of children’s voices from another life, and wondrous cloud-fantasies ever spinning by through a dazzling Summer sky, until the first-frost roses final blush with Autumn’s fading smile. remembering.... I awoke.... here.... where hope once lived in my saddened soul that her stone-cold heart could be warmed by words of truth in Love’s embrace; there is nothing now but the silent settling of regrets, like Winter-dust on the tapestry of Time and moonlight on a broken dream! |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This write pulls me in and paints the picture, then turning, pulls me in again. Fine, fine choreography and sequence! I especially like how you made that turn from "I awoke.... here.... remembering...." to "remembering.... I awoke.... here...." Everything in-between and after was, as usual, so well done, Dreampoet! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very emotional. we all shall keep dreaming because reality is very real, brutaly real. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
" remembering.... I awoke.... here.... where hope once lived in my saddened soul that her stone-cold heart could be warmed by words of truth in Love’s embrace; there is nothing now but the silent settling of regrets, like Winter-dust on the tapestry of Time and moonlight on a broken dream!" Bruce, this is so vivid, for lack of a better word....the emotion here is tangible. I like this very much!  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sad regret fills these words...painting a picture of lost hope....Keep dreaming for I am one who can say dreams can become the greatest reality....weave dear poet and let the dreams you weave flow across the landscape of time....Magnificent writing...*Big Hugs* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"remembering.... I awoke.... here.... where hope once lived in my saddened soul" ~ I could not help but let out my own sad sigh on remembering... Your quill spills poignantly poetic ink. ~ May you be making wonderful new memories for your tomorrows!   Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet, A touching write, enjoyed. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
How sad this is and how poignantly you draw me into your weave. Excellent words. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ I really like this ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: So wonderfully expressed! I am captivated by your genre! Love, Margherita  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ Back in here for another read ... and to take a moment to say that you write with heart and purpose ... I would encourage you to continue ... you would be missed were you not to share even more~  Now ... no final curtain .... but how's about another curtain call ?  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
Great love poem lots of passion. Tom Zart |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"there is nothing now but the silent settling of regrets, like Winter-dust on the tapestry of Time and moonlight on a broken dream!" heart gripping and beautiful poet |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This one touched my heart...and soul. Very nicely penned, Nancy |
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