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Will I Be In Your Memory
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Will I Be In Your Memory |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Will I Be In Your Memory What if I was to hide away Never making a sound If silence continued on Would I never be found What if I silently disappear Then I keep out of sight IfI am full of self doubt How was I able to write What if by being invisible I became this nonentity If I am no longer around Could you envisage me What if I faded into nothing Then toss away the key If I am never seen again Will I be in your memory Hope ©2007 Link to the poem with music and graphic at the URL below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_83872010.html |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Very beautiful and thought provoking ... "What if by being invisible I became this nonentity If I am no longer around Could you envisage me " I have often wondered this myself. Lovely!!! ~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Very beautiful, could feel your words. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. I love this question style. imagine that you sat on the bank of Swan River at night and singing to the reflection of the entire sky. beautiful Pirth. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think he knows you'd never fade away because if he did even think that, he'd be scared and treat you better  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Something tells me you are hard to forget  Happy Easter and thanks for the "garden." My girls just loved it. |
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