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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-04-08 08:41 AM


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with dawn
the sun rising
shines through
a hole in the clouds

its rays fall
on a young man
walking down cedar road

as she passes him by
she says good day
he smiles and responds
it certainly is

and dawn then spends
the whole afternoon
on her sofa wondering
where have i seen
that man before


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-04-08 10:45 AM



Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-04-08 10:47 AM


"with dawn
the sun rising
shines through
a hole in the clouds" this picture was exactly in my mind yesterday.

lovely and soft. one can tell many stories from the scene.



Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2007-04-08 01:39 PM


BRAVO!!! Well said....perfect reflection for this Easter Morning...*Big Hugs*
jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
4 posted 2007-04-08 01:43 PM


Second Bravo!

Hugs Kimberly  Happy Easter "Praise the Lord,
praise the lord, Praise to Jesus Christ from whom all blessings flow"


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2007-04-08 01:54 PM


Beautiful and captivating.

Love,
Margherita

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