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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-04-11 07:14 AM


Two Lives

I say to you I live two lives
I live two lives and have two wives
One for the flower of my mind
And one of a physical bind

A spirit lies within my bones
With silver notes and overtones
With gold and blue and assure sky
That lifts me up to heavens lie

She reins the essence of my need
The very staunch that stops my bleed
Tends my wounds and sets the air
She is a love that I would dare

She is the yin of the yang
The soul of the bell when rang
The golden notes that harp my hope
The very mainstay of my cope

She’s half the finality of sane
And half the kingdom I would reign


© Copyright 2007 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-04-11 07:57 AM


a beautiful write for a lovely lady


LeeJ
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2 posted 2007-04-11 08:08 AM


compassionate love and graditude sings from the vows of this....

wonderfully written

SmartChick
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3 posted 2007-04-11 09:41 AM


An absolutely beautiful poem for your dear wife.
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2007-04-11 09:44 AM


passing,
Good morning and thank you for the read and reply.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2007-04-11 09:45 AM


LeeJ
Thank you sweetie and the top of the morning to ya.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2007-04-11 09:46 AM


SmartChick
You are a dear.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-04-11 11:02 AM


Oh, my sweet sonneteering friend, you have MORE than two lives in the grand scheme of life and living! winky wink

May love forever fill your "mind" & "body"!

Angel hugs 'n kisses,
EA


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8 posted 2007-04-11 11:17 AM


this is so sweet!  Hugs you dear man.
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2007-04-11 12:06 PM


Earth Angel
Well angels don't lie so I have alot to look forward to.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2007-04-11 12:07 PM


Gentle Spirit
Thank you for the read and hugs.

Margherita
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11 posted 2007-04-11 12:52 PM


quote:
A spirit lies within my bones
With silver notes and overtones
With gold and blue and assure sky
That lifts me up to heavens lie



Dear Seymour, your words are absolutely fascinating. They hold your gratitude, your sensitivity, your dreams, your honesty.
Simply wonderful!

... to your "two wives" you have to add all your heart friends here and see how well you dance through your days and nights.

You are a gift.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2007-04-11 02:15 PM


Margherita
Your words are like a breath of spring, thank you.

Honeybunch
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13 posted 2007-04-11 03:48 PM


A lovely write that leaves a song in the heart!
Drauntz
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14 posted 2007-04-11 04:49 PM


Sir Tabin, you are going to charm the moon out from  west today. so She can soon read your next poem.

Sooo beautiful
It is so nice to get off the train to have a stretch, isn't?
LOL
Thank you for the spring scent
have a wonderful afternoon, sir.

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2007-04-11 05:51 PM


Honeybunch
What a pretty comment, thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2007-04-11 05:52 PM


Drauntz
A beautiful comment, I thank you.

Startime55
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17 posted 2007-04-12 12:57 PM


What a wonderful poem you write sharing with us your love in visions that delight the senses....Magnificent...*Big Hugs*
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2007-04-12 07:12 AM


Startime55
Thank you and big hugs back.

vandana
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19 posted 2007-04-12 12:33 PM


good read
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20 posted 2007-04-12 12:42 PM


And you are truly blessed Sy!!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2007-04-12 02:33 PM


vandana
Thank you dear.

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2007-04-12 02:34 PM


scorpio
Thank you

nakdthoughts
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23 posted 2007-04-12 07:47 PM


Your poems are always uplifting Sy...

thanks
to you both
M

Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2007-04-12 11:04 PM


Maureen,
It's a pleasure when I see you here.

The Lady
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25 posted 2007-04-14 08:49 PM




a lovely poem
for both your wives...

Seymour Tabin
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26 posted 2007-04-14 08:56 PM


Lady
Thank you sweetie.

Sunshine
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27 posted 2007-04-14 09:28 PM


Seymour, Sir...

Your companions both, smile...

at the while of your says,
and the gift of your days.

and the rest of us?

We just receive the best of all your gifts.






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