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Of All Creation |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Of All Creation Wrapped in the warmth of darkness heated by stardust weaving gifts of fantasy reflects memories of the times filled with laughter and words touched the heart Embracing all the seasons as winter bows to spring and love comes into blossom opening the heart to encompass all around vanquishing judgment Awed by the morning sunrise filling eastern sky where the colors paint the soul of a masterpiece no earthly hand can copy such wondrous sight Fading into evening as dusk settles round my thoughts grow meditative about this short life and what purpose is in store when the flesh is gone Then gazing to the heavens filled with brilliant stars I know of eternity where two become one and love will fill the expanse of all creation Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer April 7, 2007 [This message has been edited by Startime55 (04-07-2007 07:12 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done my little friend of the north. Miss seeing you, but do understand all about life's needs. Happy Easter to you, your loved ones. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
SUPERB! I especially LOVE: “where the colors paint the soul of a masterpiece no earthly hand can copy” and, the grand-fine ending: “Fading into evening as dusk settles round my thoughts grow meditative about this short life and what purpose is in store when the flesh is gone Then gazing to the heavens filled with brilliant stars I know of eternity where two become one and love will fill the expanse of all creation” MUCH applause! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my how beautiful this is Karen. Happy Easter to you and yours.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There you are! You've been missed! ~ and this stellar piece of writing is one of the reasons why!!! "Awed by the morning sunrise filling eastern sky where the colors paint the soul of a masterpiece" ~ heavenly! In fact, the entire poem is worth repeating so I am saving it to my trove of special poetic treasures!  Loving hug, EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Awed by the morning sunrise filling eastern sky where the colors paint the soul of a masterpiece no earthly hand can copy" Karen, your brushstrokes always paint such wondrous scenes! I am so happy to read your poetry again!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so wonderful to read you and how beautifully romantic this poem is! Happy Easter to you and yours |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
is it indeed beautiful and I am partial to... "Wrapped in the warmth of darkness heated by stardust" I can feel that so well |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 I like your ending. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSisterKaren~ There is such beauty in the layers of this lovely piece~ I shall reflect meditatively on your poetic phrases~  Easter blessings to you my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, Magnus, dear man, I come often to read and be inspired by the talented poets who grace these page...this time the words I read so inspired me that I just had to write...Give my best to your wonderful family and know you are all often in my thoughts....*Big Big Hugs* Thank you, Secondhanddreampoet...having read some of your wonderful writing I feel blessed that you consider my words worth commenting on...Have a wonderful Easter...*Big Hug* Enchantress...your loving heart always fills me with joy...it is amazing how many people you touch who just can't forget you...A Happy Easter to you as well...**Big Hugs** Earth Angel...with a heart that reaches out to everyone with a loving embrace no matter how long they are gone you are such a wonderful person...I can't help but love you...Thank you, dear one...**Big Hugs** Midnitesun....your words always inspire me and grant me visions that delight my soul...**Big Hugs** Passing Shadows...Do you know how much your words touch the heart?..Your feelings always touch me deeply for your poems come from your soul...thank you for sharing them with me...I often come just to read and I look often for your work...**Big Hugs** The Lady...I too am partial to those lines for it was those feelings that inspired the rest...Thank you for feeling what I felt...**Big Hugs** Seymour....is not life like that...we all hope and pray for when the world will be filled with true love and peace...maybe we won't see it in our lifetime...maybe we will experience it after this life...I believe so...**Big Hugs** Marge...you delight my heart and soul...aways I come away from your poems feeling I have feasted upon the greatest treat...Open hearted and loving you embrace all...What a wonderful lady you are....**Big Hugs from me to you*** |
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