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Margherita
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0 posted 2007-04-06 03:27 PM



    


*    *    *


Nothing compares

to the glory

of your sacred caress

steered by my desire.

Butterflies and passion flowers

in sunset’s fire.

Our dance

infused with grace,

perfect like

a mirror performance.

We are the stars

and the ocean waves

reflecting our light,

gently rocking towards

the shores of bliss.

Nothing compares

to the glory

of who you are

of who I am …

of Whose song we sing.

By being.

***


© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-04-06 03:56 PM


how beautiful!!!
I love the picture too.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-04-06 05:30 PM


Well, dear friend, you KNOW how divinely beautiful I find this poem of soul love! I literally get tingles when I read your exquisite poetry! ~ Whether it be fantasy, spiritual, inspirational, wisdom, nature ~ or love.


Linda

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3 posted 2007-04-06 06:04 PM


Excellent 'write'!

I especially loved the ending!:

"Nothing compares

to the glory

of who you are

of who I am …

of Whose song we sing.

By being."

much applause!

Margherita
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4 posted 2007-04-08 02:39 PM


Thank you my Poet friends Drauntz, Linda and secondhanddreampoet for letting my words touch your soul, which was their target.

When we love, we love through God, for He is LOVE.

Hugs.
Margherita

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5 posted 2007-04-08 02:55 PM


Margherita~
Not only is the Passion Flower BEAUTIFUL, the butterfly is an added bonus ... and then ... and then ... your absolutely glorious words !!!!

Amen  Amen ... this is a gift of love on this day~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2007-04-08 07:17 PM


Like a prayer softly whispered in darkness.. enjoyed the read..thank you for its delight..

Goldenrose.

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7 posted 2007-04-08 09:21 PM




At frist I was just in awe of your writing, then I read your comments "Constructive Critiques" and read that you native tongue is German and now I am speechless I have one word for your poem in your mother tongue Überraschen, Amazing.

Startime55
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8 posted 2007-04-08 11:22 PM


This beautiful poem flows over the senses gently filling the soul with warm delight....Wonderful writing...I love the whole feel of this poem...*Big Hugs*
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9 posted 2007-04-09 07:09 AM


Oh, that photo! Thank you for sharing such a fine example of 'connectedness'!
As always, your words evoke great tenderness, passion, and a sense of personal connection with a spiritual realm.

vandana
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10 posted 2007-04-09 11:03 AM


good read
Enchantress
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11 posted 2007-04-09 06:19 PM


Your words are as soft as a lover's caress.
And the picture....WOW!
Beautiful combination.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2007-04-09 09:59 PM


Enjoyed...James
Margherita
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13 posted 2007-04-10 07:35 PM


I enjoyed all your kind and generous replies, my dear Poet friends. Thank you!

Love,
Margherita

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14 posted 2007-07-06 04:07 AM




(smiles) Oh Margherita, as always your melismatic words and imagery are enchanting, with the "butterflies and passion flowers in sunset’s fire" line being my personal favorite, yay! (sigh) Never stop being the wonderful poetess and person you are, yay, bless you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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15 posted 2007-07-06 04:24 AM


you have touched my soul deeply this night~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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