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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-04-06 01:57 PM


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I really don’t believe
He wanted it that way

It is easy to be a hero
When the only weapons
Are sharp words
A cutting phrase or two
With colorful sayings
For a flag

In small square
Holes above the street
Formed by a
Latticework of crimson bricks
These gathered sparrows
Have a very different opinion
All together

Regardless of troubles
The biting bitter cold
That met them again at dawn

It is still a good day
To be alive


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-04-06 02:04 PM


Great ponderings, great poem.

And I agree with you, He did not want it to be that way.

A good day to be alive? Yes ... He is Life itself, no beginning no end.

Love,
Margherita

Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-04-06 03:05 PM


"It is still a good day
To be alive" while being viewed as hopelessly dead.

enjoyed as always.


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