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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2007-04-06 11:06 AM


When thin white branches spring forth with green
And mighty Oaks create a screen

Her windows she can now leave bare
Slide off her gown, let down her hair

No neighbors peeking round the pane
In solitude she is again


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1 posted 2007-04-06 11:09 AM


this made me smile, I was thinking how nice it will be once the trees bloom and fill in and block the windows again....enjoyed this
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2 posted 2007-04-06 11:14 AM


Thanks SEA The leaves are finally out in Georgia, and the neighbors are out of sight-out of mind again...lol.
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3 posted 2007-04-06 12:06 PM


Tina~
Just one more reason for welcoming the blooming season~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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TinaTrivett
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4 posted 2007-04-06 12:25 PM


Thanks Marge...hope your having a great Spring day. Although I think parts of the US still look like Winter.
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5 posted 2007-04-06 03:16 PM


"In solitude" in spring? the soul? her thought shall be like a butterfly.

very beautiful.

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6 posted 2007-04-07 09:53 AM


Thank you Drauntz Appreciate it.

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