Red Shoe Dawn...late as always for the shoe challenge

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Open Poetry #40

Red Shoe Dawn...late as always for the shoe challenge

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2007-04-06 11:03 AM

Red Shoe Dawn

this morning
I woke
to find
you
sleeping next
to me
in all
your spender
and I
clicked my mind
three times
and realized
I was home

“all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-04-06 11:13 AM

"and I
clicked my mind
three times
and realized
I was home"
I love this writing. seriously funny.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2007-04-06 11:45 AM

OneSlick~
Awwww ... me wub this one muches berry~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

3 posted 2007-04-06 02:10 PM

Very cute!

Love,
Margherita

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2007-04-06 02:23 PM

.

Now this is very good

With your permission would like to include it
in my Word File of poems by others

This is a masterpiece

John

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2007-04-06 02:25 PM

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!

Now, go to your closet and write a poem for every pair of shoes. Then you'd certainly have a book! *laughing*

Miss you muchly Lady Helen.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2007-04-06 02:55 PM

nice

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

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Florida

7 posted 2007-04-06 03:41 PM

So clever.Enjoyed it.martyjo

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2007-04-06 08:56 PM

Hmmm...wonder why my responses are only partially updating....

Aw well...I get to say again....

L O V E D THIS!

As I do all yours...

j.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

9 posted 2007-04-07 07:38 PM

love it Helen!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2007-04-07 10:36 PM

Excellent Helen!
I'd say you met this challenge very well.
Hugs, Nancy

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2007-04-07 11:07 PM

Aw....so sweet! Clever, too! *hugs*...jo

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