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lgina
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0 posted 2007-04-05 07:41 PM



Tomorrow always seems so far away.

Time just rumbles around and never does it stop.

Light becomes dark then light agian.

Wake up

Go to work

Come home

Go to bed.

The day has become yesterday.

Tomorrow always seems so far away.


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1 posted 2007-04-05 07:53 PM


yes, this is how some days seem to stretch out
Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-04-05 07:57 PM


It is nice that one finds time to come out of the day-night cycle to post a poem here.
enjoyed.
out again soon.

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3 posted 2007-04-06 06:56 AM


makes a person ask "is this all there is to life?"

I know what you mean here...good write

Huan Yi
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4 posted 2007-04-06 08:53 AM


.

yesterday is even farther

John

.

Margherita
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5 posted 2007-04-06 01:55 PM


It's because you have expectations for tomorrow ... when we savour the moment and make the best of it, we less often feel that we are missing something.

You expressed your thoughts well.

Love,
Margherita

paullallady
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6 posted 2007-04-06 03:44 PM


this really described the emotion of time passing slowly and without any joy.  You did a wonderful job with this.
Martie
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7 posted 2007-04-06 04:35 PM


Hi Gina!

Time is such a trickster...

when you're having a great time...it comes and goes so fast,

when you're bored...oh, how it plods along

but when your sad and you wish for it to skip the day altogether, it turns around and makes you remember all the other sad days of your life.

It doesn't seem fair!

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8 posted 2007-04-06 11:03 PM


Hello, again,


Again, Igina...

welcome home!


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