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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2007-04-05 04:22 PM


What is real?
Birds wings,
blazing colours quivering
through emerald trees.
What is beauty?
Misty mornings, meandering
through green valleys,
blasted by bright sunbeams.
What is happiness?
Amber mornings of birds,
mist, sunshine and inner love.

At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348.

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2007-04-05 04:05 PM


Beautiful Phil..
Gave me a feeling of inner peace and tranquility.  

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-04-05 08:05 PM


beautiful indeed.
enjoyed

The Lady
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The Southwest
3 posted 2007-04-05 08:22 PM




yes and soft joy too

lovely


passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-04-06 06:48 AM


if I were an artist I could paint this and make a million dollars

so very descriptive and vivid! I love it!

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2007-04-06 06:50 AM


What is happiness?
Amber mornings of birds,
mist, sunshine and inner love.

a crisp, coolness of breeze,
sparkling dew drops on leaves,
a new morn, filled with hope.

Glad to see you back
~ARH

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2007-04-06 11:39 AM


Very lovely pensiveness, dear Phil! When we have that inner love, the world around us blooms.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2007-04-06 04:58 PM


Welcome back, to the pip family fold, Dear Poet!

"What is happiness?
Amber mornings of birds,
mist, sunshine and inner love."

~ That certainly works for me!!!

Enjoyed reading your words again! It has been too long a while!


Linda

lightkeeper
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pluto
8 posted 2007-04-08 04:41 AM


      A beautifully inspired poem as always darling, and describes very well of our day out together yesterday
       Love Bernadette xxxx

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2007-04-08 07:50 AM


What is happiness?
Amber mornings of birds,
mist, sunshine and inner love.


such lovely writing, Phil.
It's nice to see you  back and so happy.

M

Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2007-04-08 08:21 AM


An enjoyable image, quivering birds in emerald trees! Especially delightful today, while snow blankets the ground outside my window!
lightkeeper
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pluto
11 posted 2007-04-08 01:39 PM


Phil.... may you always bring joy to your friends here on pip,as you do everyday in my life.

     Love
         Bea xxxx

jody5
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12 posted 2007-04-08 01:46 PM


Wow Phil that was truely beautiful.  It was a really great write.


Hugs Kimberly


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