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My Soul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Soul My soul has sewn a chaos web Stopped a zone of violence ebb Took a lean on chaos grime And gave a meaning to its time It lent some shadows to the trim To place some subject on the rim Expanding in a circles fade It left some fields of green and glade And in those fields you’ll find some bones With words upon the fading stones Here fairs some chaos brought to bear A fruit within it’s time of share A place a graven and a goal A base and haven for a soul Noah’s Ark an electric spark To birth a star within the dark I touched the chaos formless shape And made of it a cloak of drape |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I always enjoy how easily you seem to do these, and make it "bounce"  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA I do try for more bounce to the ounce. LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your sonneteering soul always seems to shed light on, and bring clarity to, the chaos in life!  Happy spring mornin', Sir T!!! loves ya muchly! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, And am always happy to be recognized by an Angel.  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"I touched the chaos formless shape And made of it a cloak of drape" love this expression. now I know why you kept talking about chaos.becasue either you are wearing it or hanging it...too close to you. I thought the drape has long torn. why you put it up again? Have you taken your drink yet today? enjoyed as always. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Sy! Love reading you each day.. just don't have the time anymore to reply to each one. But, please know I do stop by and read your words.  & , NancyFor it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are simply AMAZING ... all the rhyme and reason why I adore the look at life through your poetic eye~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, I know you do and I thank you.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Can't thank you enough for your wonderful replies. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A place a graven and a goal A base and haven for a soul Noah’s Ark an electric spark To birth a star within the dark your rhymes never seem forced, how do you do that so wonderfully and still make so much sense? wonderfully done |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Because you are so sweet. |
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