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steavenr
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0 posted 04-05-2007 12:55 AM       View Profile for steavenr   Email steavenr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit steavenr's Home Page   View IP for steavenr

flurbian composnad skerosh tulus
rosentad simplus nexon phelus
orschpa doula soznad finelle
prosonton eshta losoproniel

undanexchlos soma paleesh
resultamoz ventah sashplesh
soloshkenaz, faloupashas, knorsk
soloshkenaz, faloupashas, qvork

und tameelcarooshavesk amuk
amuk, amuk, caleshma, caleshma amuk

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 04-05-2007 01:27 AM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

I actually speak fluent flurbian...and this is the best I've seen!
The sleek lines, the drumming accent...the way it tickles the throat, when gasping for breath...
I believe you might need a hyphen, just for pause, a safety measure really...
Unique and poised display of masterful intent!
passing shadows
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wow...I was thinking I just woke up too early this morning

Earth Angel
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Having been born 'n raised in Flurbia, and am a proud Flurburite, I, like TD, am fluent in the Flurbabian language. This poetic piece is fantabulous! It makes me miss my fabulous fabled homeland!



Linda
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4 posted 08-01-2007 04:20 PM       View Profile for Warrior Bristo   Email Warrior Bristo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Warrior Bristo

what the heck kind of language is this!? I've never heard of such a language! I think i am very confused....lol...nice poem though.

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