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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-04-04 10:52 PM



Some Women


Some women
by just the way
they touch you
tell you a lot.

If you miss them
when they pull away
perhaps they have
something that
you want.


JamesLee
04April
2007




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Krishankins
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1 posted 2007-04-04 10:53 PM


That sounds like something from a zen book of poetry JM. I like its brevity.

My child's smile tells me there's still hope

The Lady
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2 posted 2007-04-04 11:21 PM




perhaps James

or... maybe for sure


passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-04-05 08:53 AM


yep!
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-04-05 09:22 AM


Aloha, Island Man!

"If you miss them
when they pull away
perhaps they have
something that
you want."

~ Men always seem to want what they can't have! It's the hunter in them, I believe! They love to conquer and to conquer in love.


Linda

Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-05 11:58 AM


how true. do not wait till they pulled away.

enjoyed

iliana
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6 posted 2007-04-06 02:41 AM


Yep, that sounds about right, JamesLee...but it took me awhile to learn that...hehehe.  *smiles*.....jo
paullallady
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7 posted 2007-04-06 03:58 AM


beautifully stated and so true.
Margherita
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8 posted 2007-04-06 06:41 PM


Truth is told through the touch, I agree.

And you have learned your lessons!

Nice job.

Love,
Margherita

Pilgrimage
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9 posted 2007-04-07 04:11 PM


Oh, very nicely done! Short, and simple, and elegantly phrased.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2007-04-09 04:31 AM


all true words here James   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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