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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2007-04-04 10:18 PM


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why deny
the obvious

were she not as such
a body beautiful
would any man glance twice
or unless by bonds required to
look at her at all

she stretches out
above the plain
and who is it then
that might sustain

she doesn’t
own her world


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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
1 posted 2007-04-04 11:18 PM




"she doesn’t
own her world"

ah so true John

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
2 posted 2007-04-04 11:22 PM


Ah Lady,

One of those
who rescues me
from opprobrium . . .

Thank you

John


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
3 posted 2007-04-05 10:19 AM


Doesn't say much for our world does it?
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-04-05 12:41 PM


checked the Femme fatale. I misunderstood in previous writng.
enjoyed.


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