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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2007-04-03 10:04 PM







~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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1 posted 2007-04-03 10:09 PM


Ah dear Marge~This is incredibly beautiful!
Now this has become a new favourite of mine from you.
I do indeed deem this a keeper.
Hugs & Love, Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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2 posted 2007-04-03 10:10 PM


wow. execellent! you poem makes the moon shine brigher tonight.
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3 posted 2007-04-03 10:23 PM


A full mooon is such a beautiful thing and your words reflect that romance.

   Rae

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4 posted 2007-04-03 11:51 PM


as eloquent as your words.

          Hugs Kimberly


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5 posted 2007-04-04 12:47 PM


Awwww Marge, this is just beautiful. You have always been so talented.

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6 posted 2007-04-04 01:06 AM


Most beautiful, the moon and the poem,   twin orbs! martyjo
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7 posted 2007-04-04 01:31 AM


Dear Marge:  This is the only place I will get to see the April moon I think.  we have had such cloudy weather and had snow yesterday. However, It couldn't be more beautiful that this one and the poem is lovely!

Love
Betty Lou

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8 posted 2007-04-04 04:45 AM


This is so very pretty Marge...

(I just wish one of the orbs had been blue, for Earth.)

But your choice is probably right--people tell me I over-complicate things.

grin

Over-complicate?

It's either complicated or it ain't, right?

I rank that right up there there with "over-exaggerate."

laughing

I'm a teensy tipsy. Check the time.

sigh

But I love the contrast of the black and yellow, and yes'm, it works for me.

I'll go try to be have.

*hic*

(wince....sorry)

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9 posted 2007-04-04 07:33 AM


a Spring delight

thanks for sharing

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10 posted 2007-04-04 08:47 AM


hmmm, amazingly beautiful read...loved this
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11 posted 2007-04-04 09:25 AM


Lovely sights Marge.
TD

Marge Tindal
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Ah, Friends~
All I did was point the camera and *click* ... that April Moon was just glowing gold ... waiting for the lens-capture~

Then letting my words reflect her beauty was the next natural thing to do~

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it~

I am 'Luna'~
(not to be confused with 'Loony', which may also apply)

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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Si, tu sei LUNA!

Magical picture and magical words, offered in an amazing circle ... perfection!

Love and hugs, Luna!

Margherita

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14 posted 2007-04-04 03:19 PM


Marge  
You have a mind full of magic.

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15 posted 2007-04-04 11:34 PM



this is your time to shine Marge
and you have
once again


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16 posted 2007-04-05 12:54 PM


first of all, the words alone are beautiful, but added with the form of the moon that you created, well, it becomes amazing and  magical.
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17 posted 2007-04-05 01:44 AM


you could do a book just with your poems of the moon! beautiful as always Marge
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18 posted 2007-04-05 08:11 PM


This is oh so skillfully done and is beautiful.  Joyce
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19 posted 2007-04-05 08:33 PM


I think serenity has the right idea....we need to start promoting the blue, too!

But an excellent and resplendant moon she was.  Only I didn't get to see her in this shade, as we only see her in that color in the midwest, in the autumn.  She was pure, and white, in our area.  


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20 posted 2007-04-06 02:36 AM


What a moon!  Marge, you gift us with so much beauty!  TY.......*hugs*..........jo
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21 posted 2007-04-06 03:28 PM


The moon and it's aura, has always found a place in my writings...I almost feel an inspiration, just staring at a full moon, as if it begs me to write...awsome write.
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22 posted 2007-04-07 01:32 AM


Hello, dear friend!!!

You have done it again.  You have captured the moon and gift wrapped it just for me. Thanks!!!


~~Big Hugs~~



~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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23 posted 2007-04-07 02:38 AM


It seems trite, to describe a poem as pretty, but this really is...pixie-ish, piquant,perfect and..pretty
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24 posted 2007-04-07 02:17 PM


Oh yes....You know I love it...you have such a talent to capture the magic of the moon...BRAVO...*Big Hugs*
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25 posted 2007-04-08 08:58 PM


Thank you Marge, that was lovely. I really do enjoy reading your work.



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26 posted 2007-04-16 11:18 PM


Beautiful!!!
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27 posted 2007-04-17 09:35 AM


Well you certainly captured that glorious April moon with both your camera and your pen!

Such lunar splendor!


EO

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