Love (Love among the ruins challenge)

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Open Poetry #40

Love (Love among the ruins challenge)

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-06-03 02:38 AM

The ghost of charcoaled bus
Looks at the crying heart
Painfully blooming its flowers
In the morning dew

The newly opened eyes
Try hard to swallow the falls
Of thousands and thousand young
With their blind souls

At this dawn of June
Rain washes up what is down
Wind blows back what is gone
Mist walks chained memory around.

I stood there
With a note from unknown
“To the girl of next door”
In color brown

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-06-03 02:55 AM

Interesting poem -- I like the images you have painted.

A

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2007-06-03 02:23 PM

Bao~

'At this dawn of June
Rain washes up what is down
Wind blows back what is gone
Mist walks chained memory around.'

I especially love the 'mist walks chained memory around'~

Hope your day is sunny and bright~

The tropical storm has moved out ... and the day is beautiful here~

My regards to hubby and those adorable children~

*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

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