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Ericc
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0 posted 2007-04-03 05:37 PM



Everything
passes-

Only emptiness remains...brief yet
eternal.

And formless thoughts once traced beneath the
ache of momentary fingers,

Fall in tender folds against the
void.

Everything
passes-

And still there is a rise again to
what once held form.

We are at once all that ever
passes and the emptiness
that remains.

We are the ache beneath
momentary fingers.

Remembered.


[This message has been edited by Ericc (04-03-2007 08:17 PM).]

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Honeybunch
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1 posted 2007-04-03 06:39 PM


"We are the ache beneath
momentary fingers."

Excellent!  Okay then - most excellent!

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-04-03 08:14 PM


Everything
passes

yes it does

a fine read for my eyes and mind tonight Eric

Magnus
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3 posted 2007-04-03 09:40 PM


nicely done Ericc....your talent does not
wane..

jody5
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4 posted 2007-04-04 12:37 PM


Nice picturesque poetry!

Hugs Kimberly


LeeJ
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5 posted 2007-04-04 08:46 AM


We are the ache beneath
momentary fingers.


I think man is so busy looking for His one true love, his soul mate, never realizing...she/he has been there all the time...

excellent poem

Margherita
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6 posted 2007-04-04 09:20 AM


quote:
And still there is a rise again to
what once held form.

We are at once all that ever
passes and the emptiness
that remains.



And remembering brings back deep emotions.

You are the one crossing all boundaries, keeping IT all PRESENT.

Sometimes I ache for this type of ache. It can bring tears of such intensity and release ... and the peace of knowing.

Wonderful words, dear Eric.

Loving you,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2007-04-04 09:27 AM


Magnificent

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2007-04-04 10:47 AM


Eric~
There is such poignant beauty in your thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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