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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-04-02 10:36 PM



Of My Sweetheart


To her I express the joy
the comfort that I feel,
to share in the pleasure
while partaking of the treasure
of my sweethearts warm caress.


JamesLee
02April
2007





  

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1 posted 2007-04-02 10:53 PM


Oh *sigh*....just lovely James!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-04-02 11:41 PM


VERY nice!
passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-04-03 08:34 AM


a very happy and comforting piece

wonderfully written!

paullallady
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4 posted 2007-04-03 02:15 PM


sweet, tender and wonderfully penned. evoking an emotion in the reader...beautiful.
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5 posted 2007-04-03 03:04 PM


JamesMichael~
Sounds perfectly LOVERLY~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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6 posted 2007-04-03 05:41 PM



oh James...

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