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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2007-03-31 05:43 PM




"Together" by Rassouli
* * *


The pull of Universe


* * *


Breathing together

in this moment,

our steps transform

into a passionate dance,

flowers sprout

in the desert

and new suns

flood our souls.

Close your eyes

and rise above

time and space,

open your lips

to the flow of love

and sip its nectar

from mine.

Now be aware

of the tremor

of our hearts

while we surrender

to the pull

of Universe

collapsing

into its orbit,

tasting the scent

of sweet fulfilment.
* * *


© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-03-31 06:23 PM


love looks so good on you!

beautiful piece!

iliana
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2 posted 2007-04-01 12:29 PM


Awesome!
wordwizard
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on the way to next world
3 posted 2007-04-01 12:51 PM


this is a pretty piece


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2007-04-01 11:24 AM


Margherita~
My friend ... you are sharing some beautiful ink with us~

This is soft and lovely~
*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2007-04-01 11:53 AM


Absolutely beautiful!
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Gaia
6 posted 2007-04-01 01:27 PM


"tasting the scent

of sweet fulfilment"

Oh yes, the sweetest taste of all!

Honeybunch
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7 posted 2007-04-01 03:33 PM


Lovely, Margherita!  I'm a-thinking the pull of the Universe is more powerful than we can even imagine.
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2007-04-01 05:14 PM


Your words and the graphic, match each other perfectly! ~ Truly a divine and cosmic piece of love magic!

Love your writing ~ & you!

Linda

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2007-04-01 09:15 PM


Your vision is impeccable.
Ethereal feel to this piece.

Enjoyed reading you.
TD

unholyjudgement
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Wherever my soul takes me next
10 posted 2007-04-01 11:47 PM


Very nice
Thnk you

My mind is like lightning
One brilliant flash and its gone

The Lady
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11 posted 2007-04-03 04:44 PM


"tasting the scent

of sweet fulfilment."

awesome work Margherita

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12 posted 2007-04-03 05:31 PM


Beautiful...as all that ever falls from you hands!

Love,
Eric

Margherita
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Eternity
13 posted 2007-04-04 03:33 AM


Thank you all my dear Poet friends for your loving replies.
Have a wonderful day!
Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
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14 posted 2007-04-04 12:53 PM


absolutely profound! Letting go of everything we think to be true and experience true freedom...Excellent!!

It is so good to read you again...

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15 posted 2007-07-06 04:18 AM




(smiles) And with each new scintillating verse you share here, you introduce a whole new sun to all of us, yay, this is another celestially joyous spiritual love song that's a true keeper, bless you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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16 posted 2007-07-06 04:41 AM


homeword bound, ancients all around~ look to the sky, yes, its time to fly~  

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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