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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-03-31 12:16 PM



Song of sand

You see me when you go to beach.
You see me in you engagement speech
You see me when you look at the window.
And when you perform every reach.

You see me but you ignore me.
No matter how I make my plea.
On your hat, in you shoes.
Make you cry and block your views.

Thousand years I am under your feet,
Thousand years I have been your street.
Thousand years I served your roof
Thousand years I stand in concrete

I have no mouth but I swallow.
I have no leg but I follow.
I have no wings but I fly.
I have no fins but I dive.

Have you seen the mighty me?
The one makes people to flee.
I am the famous sand storm,
Come to share my mighty glee.
Ah.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-03-31 10:20 AM


Very original write, I enjoyed it.

I love the personification of the sand storm.

Love,
Margherita

MegMeg
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since 2007-05-14
Posts 85
Virginia
2 posted 2007-05-27 09:21 PM


wow...thought-provoking, sweet!
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