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Open Poetry #40

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Pezz1
Junior Member

since 2002-10-27

Posts 33
Scotland

0 posted 2007-03-30 06:35 PM

Peace

Do you see
the pain inside
the anguish
and hurt
the nights that i cried
the nights that i wept
the tears falling down
creating the seas
in which sorrows
would drown
would slip
to the depths
of blackest despair
to linger and thrive
to grow through my cares
my heart as the ocean
your love as the moon
i eddy and flow
to your every tune
one minute i'm calm
the next theres no rest
my heart pulses madly
within this torn chest
cast loose as i am
set free on the flow
i dream of your smile
and peace i'm never to know.

*sigh*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-03-31 10:26 AM

Sigh,indeed.

I think this is very beautiful, you express your sadness so well.

May peace come ...

Love,
Margherita

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-03-31 01:13 PM

how sad.
"my heart as the ocean
your love as the moon"
if only you can save some reflection.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-03-31 05:06 PM

sigh indeed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-03-31 07:49 PM

Nice writing...James

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