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MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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NJ

0 posted 2007-03-30 01:51 PM



I saw it all, I heard it all
The pain
The screams
Words of hate and jealousy
Words the haunt my every day
The fights, you never knew I was listening
How could you?
Your world was crowded with caos

All I've seen,
AllI've heard,
All I've witnessed
left me wondering in confusion..
whether of not it was worth loving..
Left me in darkness, but no one knows why
Just me and those I trust...

Why leave me with such thoughts
To linger in my mind...
To make me wonder "what is love"
In conflic I express it..
But i fear one day it will hurt me
It doesn't really matter tho
I was too young,
I shouldn't of heard
I shouldn't of witnessed
I shouldn't of been there..


Jen--->MindBodySoul

© Copyright 2007 Jeannette Urrego - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-03-30 06:25 PM


a gentle heart. Sad.
enjoyed.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2007-03-31 10:49 AM


It is all part of life's experience.

Expressing your feelings is a step ahead on the path of forgiveness.

Very intense write!

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2007-03-31 10:53 AM


this aches


latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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4 posted 2007-04-01 12:00 PM


Your words cause people to feel. That is good writing. Sad though it may be, expressing it here may help you to let go.  Holding your hand,  martyjo  
MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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5 posted 2007-04-01 12:20 PM


Thank you so much ... its wonderful to know that my words can be felt..
I enjoy writing and sharing...  

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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