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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2007-03-30 12:06 PM


         
Artist: Diane Romanello

Dispirited
~ Linda L. Dowd

Alone and dispirited wherever I’d go,
As I paddled up-stream against river flow.
I had no intentions or purposeful path,
No dance in my step ~ just a heart filled with wrath.

My glass was half-empty ~ I was mired in self-pity.
The road that I plodded was bumpy and gritty.
I skulked in dark shadows and hid from the light.
Night skies were starless ~ my days were of night.

My eyes had no smile ~ my face wore a frown.
I was sad and dispirited as I trudged about town.
Aimless and hopeless ~ with eyes rimmed with tears,
My life knew no love ~ just heartache and fears.

I’d trip and I’d stumble each step of the way,
‘Til I raised my eyes skyward and started to pray.
Light entered my body ~ I was glowing and warm,
And around me bright butterflies did suddenly swarm.

Their rainbow wings fluttered in divine sun light,
~ Shimmering, whispering that all was all right.
Peace filled my spirit as I breathed in the scene,
For Heaven had touched me ~ I was calm and serene.

As I soaked up God’s love, floral scents filled the air,
I awoke to the beauty ~ resplendent everywhere.
My eyes were smiling ~ there was a dance in my feet,
God’s love and compassion made my world replete.

~*~

I now go with the flow as I sail life’s stream,
With hope in my heart and with many a dream!


“Happiness is a state of mind.
Think happy! ~ Be happy!”
~ Linda L. Dowd

© Copyright 2007 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-03-30 12:09 PM


Linda! That picture, this poem, and you are all just so very lovely!!  I love your spirit lady.  
JL
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2 posted 2007-03-30 04:04 PM


"I now go with the flow as I sail life’s stream,
With hope in my heart and with many a dream!"

Perfect!
But then again, you are an Earth Angel.

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

divine chaos
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3 posted 2007-03-30 05:25 PM


Lovely Linda, your words just twirl across the page, and entice my heart to do the same.  Reading you is always so uplifting

thank you for sharing

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2007-03-30 05:44 PM


Earth Angel
A true delight to read.

Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-03-30 05:55 PM


so very good.
sewasham
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6 posted 2007-03-30 07:54 PM


Very beautiful words Linda. Always enjoy your works. Take care and Have fun. Steve


Margherita
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7 posted 2007-03-31 10:11 AM


So beautifully uplifting, dear Linda.

Not only your feet, but also your words dance and the reader joins this Path of Light and Joy.

Enjoying your butterfly beauty thoroughly.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

latearrival
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8 posted 2007-04-01 12:11 PM


When ever I get the chance, I read you. Even when I do not post,I read, and as always you have never let anyone down. This is just lovely. martyjo
ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2007-04-02 10:00 AM


Faith is a lifeline, that never let's us fall.  Enjoyed this morning.
TD

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2007-04-02 10:22 AM


Gentle Spirited One ~

Good morning, Dear Donna! Thank you for your exceedingly "lovely" reply!

Have a happy day!

Loving hug,
Linda

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2007-04-02 10:23 AM


JL ~

Aww, you say the sweetest things, cowboy!

Cool 'wave'!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2007-04-02 10:26 AM


Divine Chaos ~

Hi, Sheli! It's been awhile! So good to hear from you!
I found your response to be rather "up-lifting" as well! Thank you!

Happy springtime hug,
Linda

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2007-04-02 10:27 AM


T-Man ~

Thank you! ...and a to you as well!

EA

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2007-04-02 10:29 AM


Drauntz ~

'Angel' curtsies! Thank you!

Be happy & healthy!

EA




Earth Angel
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15 posted 2007-04-02 10:31 AM


Steve ~

...and I "enjoy" it whenever you drop by for a visit!

Happy hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2007-04-02 10:33 AM


Margherita ~

Just to let you know, you are missed when you are missing! lol
You always write such sweet and thoughtful replies. They a treat to read, dear kindred spirit!

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Linda

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2007-04-02 10:35 AM


latearrival ~

martyjo, you little sweetie pie! You have me smiling from wing tip to wing tip! lol

Giving you a big hug-o-love,
Linda

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2007-04-02 10:36 AM


TD ~

I appreciate your thoughtful response to my poetic offering!

Happy springtime hugs 'n a smile,
EA

The Lady
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19 posted 2007-04-03 04:47 PM



flap those wings again Linda Angel
you have flapped a dream this way
and it's a pretty one

I love this


paullallady
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20 posted 2007-04-03 07:15 PM


what a beautiful write to show that with Gods love all things are beautiful and are made known to us.
Earth Angel
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21 posted 2007-04-04 12:20 PM


Lady Kate ~

lol That was a very cute reply!

Loves 'n hugs,
LA

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2007-04-04 12:22 PM


paullallady ~

Hello, there! Welcome aboard the pip ship!

Thanks for dropping by and for leaving such a thoughtful reply!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,
Earth Angel

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23 posted 2007-04-04 07:35 AM


well I am glad I came back to this one, because I had read it before but I suppose I didn't post a reply

beautiful write, as always, keeps me in awe

LeeJ
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24 posted 2007-04-04 08:43 AM


we women have certainly eaten our share of trials and tribulations, until we come to the path of awakening...

Love to you and thank you for this

Earth Angel
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25 posted 2007-04-04 12:11 PM


Ms Dix ~

I'm glad you popped back in, as well! I appreciate your kind words!

Loving Light 'n a big warm hug,

Linda

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2007-04-04 12:13 PM


Lovely Lee ~

May your path in life be strewn with fragrant flowers!

Kiss the mirror for me!

Linda


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