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Something Chinese |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Sun rises in the East Blue mountains beyond green hills On a road made over time Farmers travel to their fields River flows through deep gorge Out on water fishermen sing village songs White seabirds gyre above our sails I miss you all the time . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
It is beautiful and again beautiful. I wonder if you have a image of 4017 Massachusetts or Gary like. very much enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I know. I said I wouldn't reply to you anymore because I felt like I was annoying you, but damn if you didn't just make me wanna start the meal all over again... and, wince, that is too common a reply for you, but I think this is what you do best. when you write like this? I see beta fish under rice paddies ducking heron, and I smell exotica. Transaltion--good.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
liked this very much |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great serenity makes one wish to share with the loved one. Perfect job! Love, Margherita |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all SB you don't annoy me . . . Do you though recognize I am again writing to her . . . Thanks again John |
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