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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-03-29 05:55 PM

Dawn of Love’s Certainty

On this moon-bright night
in twirling tease of light
Aurora’s rainbows dance
a starlight serenade
in weightless words
(winnowed from the heart)
of love and life
renewed and proven
by passion’s fire
reflecting in your eyes,
the magic mirrors
of tomorrow’s certainty!
© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2007-03-29 10:10 PM

"reflecting in your eyes,
the magic mirrors
of tomorrow’s certainty!"

Wonderful writing!
Oh my yes...I love this.  

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2007-03-30 01:13 AM

Nancy has said what I would have said!
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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3 posted 2007-03-30 01:19 AM

beautiful love poem.
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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4 posted 2007-03-30 07:41 AM

Bruce, it is good to see your words here this morning, and what beautiful words they are!  This is truly lovely!

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna
ArtSolstice
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5 posted 2007-03-30 08:54 AM

Exceptionally fine, and greatly enjoyed!
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2007-03-30 09:01 AM

lovely write Bruce
ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2007-03-30 06:04 PM

This is my favorite, so far, that you have written.  Fantastic imagery, and honest simplicity.

TD
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